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 # 🌱 Welcome To Kernel
 
-Kernel is a peer-to-peer learning community dedicated to the journey towards a better understanding of truth: in our work, in our relationships with others, and in our inner worlds. 
+Kernel is a peer-to-peer learning environment dedicated to the journey towards a better understanding of truth: in our work, in our relationships with others, and in our inner worlds. 
 
-> 💡 Find the others, have fun, learn freely, and get funding. 
+> 💡 Learn freely, work on your craft, have fun, find the others. 
 
 Our question is: **how can we build a better web for the people we care about**? 
 
 And one possible question for you is: **how can I participate in a way that honours my gifts, and who I really am?** 
 
-Our answer is: seed an educational community where people **come to trust**, through first-hand experience, that we can learn together how to create with care. 
+Our answer is: seed an educational environment where people **come to trust**, through first-hand experience, that we can learn together how to create with care. 
 
 ## What is Kernel, though?
 
-Kernel is eight weeks of conversation in a "block" of 250 brilliant people intended to connect creativity with care. We aim to change the way we think of contributing and the kinds of projects to which we contribute. Kernel is about humility, honesty, gratitude, and intentional service.
+Kernel is nine weeks of conversation in a "block" of ~150-300 people intended to connect creativity with care. We aim to change the way we think of contributing and the kinds of projects to which we contribute. Kernel is about humility, honesty, gratitude, and intentional service.
 
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