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-I'm happy to announce the release of version 4.2.0 of the Home Assistant Glow 🌟. It's a small release this time, built on the latest version of ESPHome (2024.8.x) and contains mostly dependency updates for Docusaurus.
+I'm excited to announce the release of version 4.2.0 of the Home Assistant Glow 🌟. It's a small release this time, built on the latest version of ESPHome (2024.8.x) and contains mostly dependency updates for Docusaurus.
 
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 ## Moved to Web Server layout V3
 
-The Home Assistant Glow has been moved to the version 3 layout of the [web server][webserver] component. This new version of the web server has a new design and is more user-friendly. Also more responsive you can double click on the tabs to make them bigger and it also looks better from a mobile.
+The Home Assistant Glow has been upgraded to version 3 of the [web server][webserver] component. This latest version features a fresh design that is more user-friendly and responsive. You can now double-click on tabs to enlarge them, and the layout is optimized for a better mobile experience.
 
 ![Web Server - version 3](../static/img/blog/webserver-v3.png)