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subfiles/experience/vermeer/appsec.tex

@@ -2,14 +2,13 @@
 \begin{document}
 \begin{itemize}
     \item Built and scaled Vermeer's DevSecOps program
-    \item Drove adoption of SAST, SCA, Secret Scanning, and other tools
-    \item Implemented security gates to enforce security-by-design
-    \item Configured automated fixes to improve security and reduce overhead
-    \item Audited and configured git repos using GitHub's API
-    \item Remediated hundreds of leaked secrets and vulnerabilities
+    \item Deployed SAST, SCA, Secret Scanning, and other tools
+    \item Enforced Security-by-Design through security gates and SLAs
+    \item Reduced developer toil by configuring automated security fixes
+    \item Automated git repo compliance using GitHub's API
     \item Pentested APIs, web applications, mobile apps, and embedded systems
-    \item Performed threat modeling for new products and features
-    \item Worked with Architects and Engineering Managers to standardize processes
-    \item Consulted for IT on architecture committee
+    \item Created threat models for numerous products
+    \item Standardized processes with Engineering Managers
+    \item Architecture committee member for IT development
 \end{itemize}
 \end{document}

subfiles/experience/vermeer/corpsec.tex

@@ -1,15 +1,14 @@
 \documentclass[../../../main.tex]{subfiles}
 \begin{document}
 \begin{itemize}
+    \item Ransomware threat actors contained and eradicated post-foothold
+    \item Developed custom honeypots, incident response tools, and data analysis tools
+    \item Detection lab created and maintained for purple teaming
+    \item Used Detection-as-Code principles to write detections at scale
     \item Led investigations in high-pressure security events
     \item Mentored junior members of the SOC
-    \item Contained and eradicated multiple ransomware threat actors post-foothold
-    \item Wrote detections at scale using a detection-as-code approach
-    \item Built and maintained a detection lab environment
     \item Pentested APIs, web applications, embedded systems, and mobile apps
-    \item Worked with cross-functional teams to reduce workstation attack surface
-    \item Developed custom honeypots, incident response tools, and data analysis tools
-    \item Created CI/CD pipelines for custom tooling and detections-as-code
-    \item Administered security infrastructure on Linux and Windows systems
+    \item Administered security infrastructure such as BloodHound and Hashtopolis
+    \item Reduced workstation attack surface by working with cross-functional teams
 \end{itemize}
 \end{document}