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@@ -53,22 +53,25 @@ <h1>NodeSchool Montréal</h1>
           <p class="about"><strong>Get help from mentors</strong>.</p>
           <div class="event">
             <p id="events" class="title register">
-              Wednesday <strong>February 22<sup>nd</sup></strong> 5:30pm-8:33pm
+              Wednesday <strong>February 22<sup>nd</sup></strong> 5:30pm-8:31pm
             </p>
             <p class="schedule">
-              <strong>Agenda</strong>
+              <strong>Timeline</strong>
               <ul class="timeline">
                 <li>
                   <em>5:30pm</em> Get your laptops ready to Node and JavaScript!
                 </li>
                 <li>
-                  <em>5:40pm</em> Share your work-in-progress projects
+                  <em>5:45pm</em> Share your ideas and projects
                 </li>
                 <li>
-                  <em>6:00pm</em> Complete a <a href="http://nodeschool.io/#workshoppers">tutorial</a> or work on your own project - ask mentors for help
+                  <em>5:55pm</em> Doors close unless you are on the invite list 36 hours in advance. Building Security.
                 </li>
                 <li>
-                  <em>8:00pm</em> Demos of your work, drinks
+                  <em>6:00pm</em> Pick a <a href="http://nodeschool.io/#workshoppers">tutorial</a> or work on your own project + ask mentors to help
+                </li>
+                <li>
+                  <em>8:00pm</em> See demo's and demo your work
                 </li>
               </ul>
             </p>
@@ -80,7 +83,7 @@ <h1>NodeSchool Montréal</h1>
             </div>
             <tito-widget event="nodeschoolmtl/nodeschool-wed-fed-22"></tito-widget>
           </div>
-          <p>Workshops are run by volunteers, you can  <a href='https://github.com/nodeschool/organizers/wiki/Event-Mentor-Best-Practices#on-being-a-mentor' target="_blank">mentor</a> too.</p>
+          <p>Workshops are run by volunteers. You can  <a href='https://github.com/nodeschool/organizers/wiki/Event-Mentor-Best-Practices#on-being-a-mentor' target="_blank">be a mentor</a> too.</p>
           <h3>"What should I expect?"</h3>
           <p>It's a self-directed learning environment where you bring your own laptop to learn. Attendees work on the Node tutorials from <a href="http://nodeschool.io/#workshopper-list" target="_blank">nodeschool.io</a>, but if you have a personal project you are working on, do it! The goal of NodeSchool is to help people explore and learn Node. Mentors can help you when you hit roadblocks.</p>
           <h3>"What is a tutorial?"</h3>
@@ -91,7 +94,7 @@ <h3>"How do I run a tutorial?"</h3>
             <pre>$ npm install -g learnyounode
 $ learnyounode</pre>
           </code>
-          <p>Having trouble installing Node? No worries &mdash; we'll do our best to help you get set up once you arrive.</p>
+          <p>Having trouble installing Node? No worries &mdash; we'll help you get set up once you arrive.</p>
           <h2 id="codeofconduct">Code of Conduct</h2>
           <p>We promise a safe, harrassment-free learning environment. Report any concerns immediately to organizers. We follow the <a href="http://confcodeofconduct.com/" target="_blank">conference code of conduct</a>.</p>
         </div>
@@ -102,10 +105,10 @@ <h2 id="codeofconduct">Code of Conduct</h2>
           <div class="mailinglist">
             <form action="//sana.us1.list-manage.com/subscribe/post?u=a16929a7d86b16ecfc960cd42&amp;id=8e533856ad" method="post" name="mc-embedded-subscribe-form" class="validate" target="_blank" novalidate>
               <label class="email">
-                <input type="email" value="" name="EMAIL" class="required email" placeholder="Your email for next events">
+                <input type="email" value="" name="EMAIL" class="required email" placeholder="Your email address to get invited to the next event">
               </label>
               <div style="position: absolute; left: -5000px;"><input type="text" name="b_a16929a7d86b16ecfc960cd42_8e533856ad" tabindex="-1" value=""></div>
-              <input type="submit" value="Get notified" name="subscribe">
+              <input type="submit" value="Get me on this invite list" name="subscribe">
             </form>
           </div>
           <a href="https://gitter.im/nodeschool/montreal"><img src="https://camo.githubusercontent.com/fed5b5512498193ce4bba599fd94cd12b9f56491/68747470733a2f2f696d672e736869656c64732e696f2f6769747465722f726f6f6d2f6e776a732f6e772e6a732e737667"/></a>
@@ -177,7 +180,7 @@ <h2>Projects</h2>
 
           <h3>Learning Teams?</h3>
           <p>
-            A team advances its collective skill when several students and mentors work together. As a team you complete a series of small projects quicker.
+            A team advances everyone's skill when several work together, with mentors. As a team you complete a series of small projects quicker.
           </p>
           <ul>
             <li>Where do I find someone to help my team?</li>