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 This week, I found myself in the vibrant city of NYC, ready to embark on an incredible journey cycling through all five boroughs alongside @onefact.org during the renowned Five Boro Bike Tour.
 
-Let me tell you a bit about One Fact. They are a remarkable tech non-profit, dedicated to advancing healthcare access and equity worldwide through open-source AI. With esteemed support from renowned institutions like Columbia, Stanford, and the NIH, they have garnered recognition for their groundbreaking work.
 
-Personally, I am deeply motivated to pedal for this cause. I wholeheartedly believe in the immense potential of this moment in history, where technology can pave the way for remarkable advancements in healthcare. It's a chance to tackle health concerns head-on and make a tangible difference.
+Let me tell you a bit about One Fact. They’re a tech non-profit increasing healthcare access and equity globally through open-source AI and they have received funding and support from institutions such as Columbia, Stanford, and the NIH.  
 
-Drawing from my past research and experience as a psychologist, I am acutely aware of the significance of informed decision-making when it comes to healthcare. I've witnessed firsthand the power of knowledge in empowering individuals to take charge of their own well-being and advocate for themselves. It is crucial that we ensure everyone has access to the information they need to make informed choices about their health outcomes.
 
-When you donate to One Fact, you're contributing to a cause that is actively working to transform our broken healthcare system. Your donations are not only tax-deductible but also directly contribute to One Fact's mission of effecting the change we desperately need. Together, we can make a tangible impact and create a future where healthcare is accessible and equitable for all.
+I ride as I’m acutely aware of the significance of informed decision-making when it comes to healthcare. It is crucial that we ensure everyone has access to the information they need to take care of their own well-being and self-advocate.
 
-Join me on this incredible journey by supporting One Fact and together let's make a lasting difference in the lives of individuals around the world.
 
+Your donations are not only tax-deductible but also directly contribute to One Fact's mission of making the change we need. Together, we can make a tangible impact and create a future where healthcare is accessible and equitable for all.
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+Join me on this journey by supporting One Fact and together let's make a lasting difference!