Text clean-up

- Subtitle
- Page descriptions
- Cover

README.md

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-# Proudly Serving: Public service in the digital age
+# Proudly Serving: A guide to public service in the digital age
 
 * [Website](https://proudlyservingbook.com)
 * [Documentation](https://github.com/proudlyserving/proudlyserving.github.io/wiki)

SUMMARY.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # Table of contents
 
-* [Proudly Serving: Public service in the digital age](README.md)
+* [Proudly Serving: A guide to public service in the digital age](README.md)
 * [About](about.md)
 * [Call to action](call-to-action.md)
 * [Default to open](default-to-open.md)

_config.yml

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # General
 title: Proudly Serving
-description: Public service in the digital age
+description: A guide to public service in the digital age
 url: https://proudlyservingbook.com
 #baseurl: ""
 

_contents/call-to-action.md

@@ -16,20 +16,31 @@ redirect_from:
   - /call-to-action/
 ---
 
-Your civic responsibilities include a commitment to:
+If you work in public service — and in one way or another, we all do — your civic responsibilities include a commitment to:
 
 * Openness
 * Inclusiveness
 * Responsiveness
 * Agility
+* Humility
 * Resiliency
 
-With the need to deliver services better and to recruit the next generation of leaders, government must adopt effective digital practices faster than ever before. We must commit to a twenty-first century standard of service that meets the public’s changing expectations and needs.
+Delivering services in the digital age is not just the job of technologists or government officials. We must commit to a new standard that meets our changing needs and expectations.
 
-Delivering services in the digital age is not reserved for technologists. It is the work of everyone in government.
-
-Together, we can and must build a government for, by and with all people.
+Together, let’s serve for, by, and with all people.
 
 ## Swear yourself in
 
-Before getting started, swear yourself in.
+Before getting started, swear yourself in.
+
+Take the Proudly Serving pledge:
+
+> I, [YOUR NAME], earnestly swear that I will proudly serve with a new standard of public service. 
+>
+> Every day, I will do my part to serve for, by, and with all people.
+>
+> I will hold myself and others accountable to this responsibility.
+
+Congratulations on taking the first step.
+
+Let’s start proudly serving.

_pages/about.md

@@ -1,12 +1,10 @@
 ---
 layout: page
 title: About
-description: Proudly Serving is a playbook helping governments build people-centered digital public services.
+description: "Proudly Serving is a guide to building people-centered public services."
 permalink: /about/
 ---
 
-Proudly Serving is a guide to building people-centered digital public services.
-
 ## Purpose
 
 This is for everyone who:

_pages/book.md

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 ---
 layout: book
 title: Book
-description: Get the Proudly Serving book.
+description: Read the book.
 permalink: /book/
 redirect_from:
   - /download/

_pages/index.md

@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ schematype: WebSite
 layout: home
 short: "true"
 title: "Proudly Serving"
-description: "Public service in the digital age"
+description: "A guide to public service in the digital age"
 redirect_from:
   - /contribute/
   - /feedback/

_pages/manuscript.md

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+---
+layout: page
+title: Manuscript
+description: Get the latest version of Proudly Serving.
+permalink: /manuscript/
+redirect_from:
+  - /download/
+---
+
+Proudly Serving is a work in progress, but you can still [download the latest version of the manuscript](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rruJsEF8-E3qTVCv0Giw2mK43HcNS4d7233rgGk9wjw/edit?usp=sharing).
+
+How to download:
+
+1. Go to the [manuscript Google Doc](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rruJsEF8-E3qTVCv0Giw2mK43HcNS4d7233rgGk9wjw/edit?usp=sharing).
+2. Select 'File'.
+3. Then 'Download'.
+4. Choose your file type and download.
+

news/index.html

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 ---
 layout: default
 title: News
-description: "Latest Proudly Serving updates."
+description: "Latest updates on the project."
 parent: news
 redirect_from:
   - /updates/