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neon/data-collection/scene-camera-exposure/index.md

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 - **Automatic**: `Highlights`, `Balanced`, and `Shadows` automatically adjust exposure according to the surrounding lighting.
 
 ::: tip 
-The mode you choose should depend on the environment. The images below provide an example and some caveats.
+The mode you choose should depend on the lighting conditions in your environment. The images below provide some 
+examples and important considerations.
 :::
 
 ## Changing Exposure Modes
-
-From the home screen of the Neon Companion app, tap the [Scene and Eye Camera preview](https://docs.pupil-labs.com/neon/data-collection/first-recording/#_4-open-the-live-preview).
-- Tap on `Balanced` to reveal all four modes 
-- Tap on the desired mode
+From the home screen of the Neon Companion app, tap 
+the [Scene and Eye Camera preview](https://docs.pupil-labs.com/neon/data-collection/first-recording/#_4-open-the-live-preview), 
+and then select `Balanced` to reveal all four modes.
 
 ## Manual Exposure Mode
+Allows you to set the exposure time between 1 ms and 1000 ms. 
 
-`Manual` mode allows you to set the exposure time between 1 ms and 1000 ms. 
-
-::: tip 
-**Note:** Exposure duration is inversely related to camera frame rate. Exposure values above 330 ms will reduce the scene camera rate below 30fps. 
+::: tip
+Exposure duration is inversely related to camera frame rate. Exposure values above 330 ms will reduce the scene camera rate below 30fps.
 :::
 
 ## Automatic Exposure Modes
-
-**Mode: `Highlights`**
-![This mode optimizes the exposure to capture bright areas in the environment, while potentially underexposing dark areas.](Highlight.webp)
 `Highlights`- optimizes the exposure to capture bright areas in the environment, while potentially underexposing dark areas.
+![This mode optimizes the exposure to capture bright areas in the environment, while potentially underexposing dark areas.](Highlight.webp)
 
-**Mode: `Balanced`**
+`Balanced` - optimizes the exposure to capture brighter and darker areas equally.
 ![This mode optimizes the exposure to capture brighter and darker areas in the environment equally.](./Balance.webp)
-`Balanced` - optimizes the exposure to capture brighter and darker areas in the environment equally.
 
-**Mode: `Shadows`**
+`Shadows` - optimizes the exposure to capture darker areas in the environment, while potentially overexposing brighter areas.
 ![This mode optimizes the exposure to capture darker areas in the environment, while potentially overexposing bright areas.](Shadow.webp)
-`Shadows` - optimizes the exposure to capture darker areas in the environment, while potentially overexposing bright areas.