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 # Welcome
-This is my personal blog where I will share things I've done and learned about SharePoint powered by Aderant's [Handshake Software](https://www.aderant.com/solutions-handshake/). 
+Welcome to my personal blog where I will share my experiences and insights about creating SharePoint Sites with Aderant's [Handshake Software](https://www.aderant.com/solutions-handshake/).
 
-I've been in the Legal Technology field for 40 years. (Day 1 - July 28th, 1986) and I've been working with Handshake Software since it's infancy, around 2003.  Along that journey I've been a Handshake client, 3rd party consultant and an employee - and always a Fan. (well, most days).
+I have been in the Legal Technology field for four decades. (Day 1 - July 28th, 1986) and I have been working with Handshake Software since its early days, around 2003.  During that time, I have been a Handshake client, a third-party consultant and an employee - and always a Fan. (well, most days).
 
-While today I am semi-retired, I am still motiviated to do complex and interesting things with Handshake Software. 
+Although I am semi-retired now, I still enjoy doing challenging and fun things with Handshake Software.
 
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