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_posts/2024-05-28-my-2023.md

@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ In mid February, I went to visit my friends in Norway again. Another winter trad
 
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-2023 was also my first full year of doing strength training at the gym, and I supplemented that with yoga and bouldering/climbing. There were weeks where I exercised every single day, and I think I was able to really solidify this more active way of living. Now, even if I take a few weeks off (during traveling or when I'm sick), I always get back into it right away as soon as I can. Pretty proud about that, especially watching my body transform over time.
+2023 was also my first full year of doing strength training at the gym, and I supplemented that with yoga and bouldering/climbing. There were times when I exercised every single day, and I think I was able to really solidify this more active way of living. Now, even if I take a few weeks off (during traveling or when I'm sick), I always get back into it right away as soon as I can. Pretty proud about that, especially watching my body transform over time.
 
 {% picture 2023/2023-05_innsbruck.jpeg --alt Beautiful Innsbruck with mountains in the background %}
 
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ In June, there was yet another Norway trip! This cabin trip with a smaller group
 
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-In July, I spent six days in Vienna visiting a friend. Originally, our other friend was supposed to join too, but she got sick right before and couldn't come. 😢 We made the best of it though and enjoyed our time!
+In July, I spent six days in Vienna visiting a friend. Originally, our other friend was supposed to join as well, but she got sick right before and couldn't come. 😢 We made the best of it though and enjoyed our time!
 
 {% picture 2023/2023-07_100k-ice-cream.jpeg --alt Ice cream during the 100,000 steps %}