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-                In my early twenties, when I'd stay up developing all night, I'd go to Wendy's afterwards, around 12:30am, and eat some burgers. For over a year I did this. One day
-                I was doing pull-ups and passed out. I looked healthy but wasn't. It was then I became a vegetarian for several years.
+                In my early twenties, I'd often stay up developing into the night. Afterwards I'd go to Wendy's afterwards as a reward, and eat a burger or two... maybe some fries. For a few years I did this. Then one day I was doing pull-ups and passed out. I was taken to the hospital, afraid I had herniated. Turns out you can look healthy but if you eat gargabe your body will put you in check. 
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