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Deep Dive updates: #1810

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@rubys rubys commented Aug 26, 2024


The front page had a number of (in my opinion) disjoint sentences that could leave the wrong impression.

One way to interpret the way it was:

  • It normally will take a minimum of an afternoon, expect surprises, but we will partner with you.

I reworded it with the intent to convey:

  • It normally will take a minimum of an afternoon, we will complete it in minutes.
  • We have taken steps to minimize surprises, but if you encounter one we will partner with you.

I also added a link to public networking, and mentioned preconfigured databases.


I added Django in (it should be complete by the time this page goes live). I removed repetitive sentences and replaced them with a simple link.

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The front page had a number of (in my opinion) disjoint sentences that could leave the wrong impression.

One way to interpret the way it was:
- It normally will take a minimum of an afternoon, expect surprises, but we will partner with you.

I reworded it with the intent to convey:
- It normally will take a minimum of an afternoon, we will complete it in minutes.
- We have taken steps to minimize surprises, but if you encounter one we will partner with you.

I also added a link to public networking, and mentioned preconfigured databases.

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I added Django in (it should be complete by the time this page goes live).  I removed repetitive sentences
and replaced them with a simple link.
@rubys rubys requested a review from andie787 August 26, 2024 23:44
@rubys rubys merged commit c03cd34 into main Aug 27, 2024
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@rubys rubys deleted the deep-dive-updates branch August 27, 2024 13:55
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