2024-the-oninon-router

[DMusakhanov]

Tor article round 3 Diyor Musakhanov

[carinaschrenk]

Internal Feedback Round 3B from Google Poll 05.12-08.12

Thoughts

• Too technical for the general audience x2
• I like it

A general comment:

Just because something is listed in the feedback, does not mean you have to implement it.
This list is simply a collection of everything commented in the google poll.
I tried to structure the comments and merge similar ones and count how often this point was mentioned.
If a comment says "I think", this is not me (Carina), but someone who commented on the poll.

[lauraengist]

External feedback:

Part of participants that are computer science students/graduates: 56 %
Part of participants that would read the booklet if it was not for this survey: 56 %

Clarity of the article:

• Very clear: 56 %
• Clear: 22 %
• Not clear: 22 %

Technical vs. Non-technical:

• Good balance between technical depth and readability: 78 %
• The article was too technical: 22 %

Engagement:

• I stayed engaged throughout: 89 %
• I lost interest midway: 11 %

Structure of the article:

• The structure is clear and easy to follow: 89 %
• The structure was confusing: 11 %

Part of participants that understand the purpose of the article: 89 %

Part of participants that think the drawing illustrates the article: 67 %

Factual errors/inaccuracies or additional comments (example: the article is too long/short): -

[subahini]

creative writing (Suibahini Nadarajh version ) :

Picture sending a secret love note locked in a series of funky, glittery boxes, each hidden inside another. By the time it’s finally opened, nobody knows who slipped it in the first box! That’s Tor in action—your online requests hop between mystery boxes (servers), each layer adding more disguise. Sure, all that gift-wrapping slows things down, and it’s not perfect (forget to hide your name and you’re busted!), but when combined with some extra stealth tricks, it’s like being the sneakiest gift-giver on the internet.

[lauraengist]

creative writing ideas and suggestions

• Fun idea: layers of make up. Putting them on takes a lot of time - but wearing it protects your privacy, as others are not able to recognise you.

• The structure of communication is very similar to the one in the anime Demon Slayer, in the arch of the blacksmiths' village.

Ali, Arbër, Ivan, Laura