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Co-authored-by: Carolina Menezes <[email protected]>

docs/release-notes/2024-12-20-new-sponsored-count-parameter.md

@@ -7,13 +7,13 @@ createdAt: "2024-12-20T00:00:00.219Z"
 excerpt: "FastStore projects now include a new parameter to improve the management of sponsored product search results."
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-We've added a new parameter, `sponsoredCount`, to the search query. This parameter gives more control over the number of sponsored products returned in your store’s search results.
+We've added a new parameter, `sponsoredCount`, to FastStore's search query. This new parameter allows you to control the number of sponsored products displayed in your store’s search results, providing more flexibility in managing search relevance and sponsored content.
 
-> ⚠ Extension API users: If you are using the [`ClientProductGallery`](https://developers.vtex.com/docs/guides/faststore/api-extensions-extending-queries-using-fragments#clientproductgalleryquery) fragment, this change may cause errors. Make sure your implementation is updated to handle the `sponsoredCount` parameter accordingly by following the instructions in the [next section](#api-extension-users).
+> ❗️ Extension API users: If you are using the [`ClientProductGallery`](https://developers.vtex.com/docs/guides/faststore/api-extensions-extending-queries-using-fragments#clientproductgalleryquery) fragment, this change may cause errors. To prevent issues, ensure your implementation is updated to handle the `sponsoredCount` parameter by following the instructions in the [API Extension Users](#api-extension-users) section below.
 
 ## What needs to be done?
 
-To have the new parameter enabled in your project, follow these steps:
+To enable this new feature in your FastStore project, follow these steps:
 
 1. Open your FastStore project using your preferred code editor.
 2. Update your FastStore project to version `3.0.157` or later, by running the following:
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ To have the new parameter enabled in your project, follow these steps:
 
 ### API extension users
 
-If you are using the [`ClientProductGallery`](https://developers.vtex.com/docs/guides/faststore/api-extensions-extending-queries-using-fragments#clientproductgalleryquery) fragment, after updating the store version to the latest one, you may encounter the following error:
+If you are using the [`ClientProductGallery`](https://developers.vtex.com/docs/guides/faststore/api-extensions-extending-queries-using-fragments#clientproductgalleryquery) fragment, you may encounter the following error after upgrading your FastStore version:
 
 ```bash
 [FAILED] GraphQL Document Validation failed with 1 errors;
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ Running lifecycle hook "afterStart" scripts...
 
 To fix it, follow these steps:
 
-1. Go to the file where you are using the `ClientManyProducts` fragment, and add the missing `sponsoredCount` parameter.
+1. Go to the file where you are using the `ClientManyProducts` fragment, and add the missing `sponsoredCount` parameter. For example:
 
     ```ts mark=8
     import { gql } from "@faststore/core/api";