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docs/release-notes/2024-12-23-faststore-improvements.md

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 excerpt: "Improved performance experience for FastStore stores."
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-To boost mobile performance, the FastStore team made several optimizations, which resulted in higher Lighthouse performance scoring for FastStore stores from  64 to 95 after the improvements.
+FastStore has undergone significant optimizations to improve mobile performance, achieving a Lighthouse score improvement from 64 to 95.
 
 ## What has changed?
 
-The main focus of performance improvements was to optimize the homepage on mobile devices. Below are the key changes introduced:
+The main focus of these enhancements is on optimizing the homepage experience for mobile users. Below are the key changes introduced:
 
 ### Preact (experimental feature)
 
-[Preact](https://preactjs.com/) is a lightweight alternative to React that improves performance by reducing the size of the JavaScript bundle.
+[Preact](https://preactjs.com/) is a lightweight alternative to React that improves performance by reducing the JavaScript bundle size.
 
 For implementation details, see the [Improving store performance with Preact](https://developers.vtex.com/docs/guides/faststore/managing-performance-improving-store-performance-with-preact) guide.
 
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 ### Optimizing website load times
 
-To enhance website responsiveness and speed, we implemented the following:
+Several techniques have been implemented to enhance loading speeds and responsiveness:
 
-- **Preconnect & Prefetch:** Browser directives that establish early connections to external resources (fonts, images) and prioritize their fetching, resulting in faster loading times.
-- **Dynamic Imports:** Using [next/dynamic](https://nextjs.org/docs/pages/building-your-application/optimizing/lazy-loading#nextdynamic) to load components efficiently, reducing the impact on initial page load size.
-- **On-demand Analytics:** Analytics events (triggered by the `sendAnalyticsEvent` method) are now dynamically imported from the `faststore/sdk` library, meaning that these analytics scripts are only loaded when an event is triggered, reducing the initial payload and improving load performance.
+- **Preconnect and prefetch:** Browser directives that establish early connections to external resources (fonts, images) and prioritize their fetching, resulting in faster loading times.
+- **Dynamic imports:** Using [next/dynamic](https://nextjs.org/docs/pages/building-your-application/optimizing/lazy-loading#nextdynamic) to load components efficiently, reducing the impact on initial page load size.
+- **On-demand analytics:** Analytics scripts, triggered by the `sendAnalyticsEvent` method, are now dynamically imported from the `faststore/sdk` library. This ensures that these scripts are loaded only when needed, reducing the initial payload size.
 
 ## Why did we make this change?
 
-Performance is crucial for a positive user experience. While desktop performance was strong, mobile performance needed improvement. This release aims to bridge this gap and ensure a consistent, high-performance experience across all devices.
+This release brings significant improvements to mobile performance, ensuring FastStore delivers a consistently high-quality experience across all devices. Desktop performance remains robust, and mobile users will now benefit from enhanced speed and responsiveness.
 
 ## What needs to be done?