edits based on Addison'visual-presentation.html

guidelines/sc/20/visual-presentation.html

@@ -16,6 +16,6 @@ <h4>Visual Presentation</h4>
 
 <p class="note">Content is not required to use these values. The requirement is that a mechanism is available for users to change these presentation aspects. The mechanism can be provided by the browser or other user agent. Content is not required to provide the mechanism.</p>
 
-<p class="note">Writing systems for some languages use different presentation aspects to improve readability and legibility, such as paragraph start indent. If a presentation aspect in this success criterion is not used in a writing system (for example, it does not use paragraph spacing), content in that writing system can conform without it.</p>
+<p class="note">Writing systems for some languages use different presentation aspects to improve readability and legibility. If a presentation aspect in this success criterion is not used in a writing system to improve accessibility, content in that writing system does not need to use that presentation setting and can conform without it. Authors are encouraged to follow guidance for improving readability and legibility of text in their writing system.</p>
 
 </section>