Minor Faith Description Edits

[lavillastrangiato]

About The Pull Request

• Removes Psydon's name from Astrata and Noc's descriptions.
• Removes mention that Dendor is Psydon's son???
• Generally cleans up the descriptions, fixing typos and grammar errors.
• Fixes a single typo on Noc's amulet description.
• On some of the descriptions the things the gods hate or appreciate are slightly edited. Please feel free to complain about them even if you think they are small changes. I accept that these do change vibes slightly.

Why It's Good For The Game

Just makes things a little neater.

Pre-Merge Checklist

• You tested this on a local server.
• This code did not runtime during testing.
• You documented all of your changes.

[Mogelix]

Dendor shouldn't be "steward" of the seas. He's not a clerk or accountant, he is the one who hurls a massive wave at a fisher boat to swallow it whole when its haul is desperately needed in a starving village because they took his boons in the sea for granted.

I would personally like to see the forgotten god decapitalized in all references, as a kind of diminutive term used purposefully to diminish his significance... the Saviour, the Great Hero, the Creator, the All-Father, (and Psydon) these should be the appellations of his own faithful for him- and one of those should be what the 'Psydon' patron is called. The weeper should be somewhere in-between. This is just my personal head canon though.

Otherwise, excellent de-slopification and higher-standard writing.

[lavillastrangiato]

@Mogelix A steward is not just a clerk, they're keeper or manager of something. They can also keep/manage something in stead of another, which might make acolytes of Abyssor better-suited to be "stewards of the seas".

The other reason I chose that word is for alliteration value. There are, however, other words I could see how they sound; swayer, sovereign, etc.

With regards to Psydon's title, I get your gripe, but I'd personally prefer to have Forgotten God be capitalized as it's a proper noun referring to a specific individual. There's not a "god that was forgotten", There's a singular, specific Forgotten God.

[Optimism333]

Looks like decent description updates overall! Don't have any problems giving it approval.