Minor Faith Description Edits

code/datums/gods/patrons/divine_pantheon.dm

@@ -6,8 +6,8 @@
 /datum/patron/divine/astrata
 	name = "Astrata"
 	domain = "Goddess of Order, the Sun Queen"
-	desc = "The Firstborn of Psydon, twin of Noc, gifted man the Sun as her divine gift."
-	flaws = "Tyrannical, Fury, Uncompromising"
+	desc = "The Firstborn of the Forgotten God, twin of Noc, gifted mankind the Sun."
+	flaws = "Tyrannical, Ill-Tempered, Uncompromising"
 	worshippers = "Nobles, Zealots, Commoners"
 	sins = "Betrayal, Sloth, Witchcraft"
 	t0 = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/invoked/lesser_heal
@@ -18,10 +18,10 @@
 /datum/patron/divine/noc
 	name = "Noc"
 	domain = "God of Knowledge, the Moon Prince"
-	desc = "The Firstborn of Psydon, twin of Astrata, gifted man divine knowledge."
+	desc = "The Firstborn of the Forgotten God, twin of Astrata, gifted mankind divine wisdom."
 	flaws = "Resentful, Vindictive, Haughty"
 	worshippers = "Magic Practitioners, Scholars, Scribes"
-	sins = "Ignorance, Burning books, Carnal desire"
+	sins = "Ignorance, Burning Books, Indulgence of Lust"
 	t0 = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/invoked/lesser_heal
 	t1 = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/invoked/blindness
 	t2 = null
@@ -31,10 +31,10 @@
 /datum/patron/divine/dendor
 	name = "Dendor"
 	domain = "Force of Nature and Beasts"
-	desc = "The Primordial Son of Psydon, patron of beasts and the wood. Gone mad with time."
-	flaws = "Madness, Rebellious, Disorderly"
+	desc = "The embodiment of the unchanged natural world. Driven mad with time."
+	flaws = "Madness, Rebelliousness, Disorderliness"
 	worshippers = "Druids, Beasts, Madmen"
-	sins = "Deforestation, Overhunting, Disrespecting nature"
+	sins = "Deforestation, Overhunting, Disrespecting Nature"
 	t0 = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/invoked/lesser_heal
 	t1 = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/targeted/blesscrop
 	t2 = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/targeted/beasttame
@@ -43,17 +43,17 @@
 /datum/patron/divine/abyssor
 	name = "Abyssor"
 	domain = "Force of Seas and Storms"
-	desc = "The World Whale, one of the three primordial forces."
+	desc = "The World-Whale, the sovereign of the seas and storms."
 	flaws= "Reckless, Stubborn, Destructive"
-	worshippers = "Men of the Sea and Sky, Horrid sea-creechers"
-	sins = "Fear, Hubris, Trying to tame water and storms"
+	worshippers = "Sailors of the Sea and Sky, Horrid Sea-Creachers, Fog Islanders"
+	sins = "Fear, Hubris, Trying to Tame the Seas"
 
 /datum/patron/divine/necra
 	name = "Necra"
 	domain = "Force of Death and Decay"
-	desc = "The Veiled Lady, a feared but respected God who leads the dead."
+	desc = "The Veiled Lady, a feared but respected Force and keeper of the dead."
 	flaws = "Unchanging, Apathetic, Strict"
-	worshippers = " The Dead, Gravekeepers and Mourners"
+	worshippers = "Dark Elves, Gravekeepers, Mourners"
 	sins = "Undeath"
 	t0 = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/invoked/lesser_heal
 	t1 = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/targeted/burialrite
@@ -62,47 +62,47 @@
 // ............ SAINTS ..................
 /datum/patron/divine/ravox
 	name = "Ravox"
-	domain = "Saint of Warfare, Struggle and Chivalry"
-	desc = "The strong-arm of the Pantheon, he watches man from afar."
-	flaws = "Careless, Confrontational, Proud"
-	worshippers = "Warriors, Sellswords & the Ambitious"
+	domain = "Saint of Warfare, Struggle, and Chivalry"
+	desc = "The blade of the Pantheon, a patron of all who struggle in warfare."
+	flaws = "Carelessness, Aggression, Pride"
+	worshippers = "Warriors, Sellswords, Guardsmen"
 	sins = "Cowardice, Cruelty, Stagnation"
 
 /datum/patron/divine/xylix
 	name = "Xylix"
-	domain = "Saint of Trickery, Freedom and Inspiration"
-	desc = "Mortal turned trickster and shadow of the Pantheon."
-	flaws = "Annoying, Liar, Deceitful"
+	domain = "Saint of Trickery, Freedom, and Inspiration"
+	desc = "Some say he does not exist, but regardless he shadows the Pantheon."
+	flaws = "Petulance, Deception, Irreverence"
 	worshippers = "Cheats, Artists, the Hopeless"
 	sins = "Boredom, Predictability, Routine"
 
 /datum/patron/divine/pestra
 	name = "Pestra"
 	domain = "Saint of Disease, Alchemy, and Prophecy"
-	desc = "A mortal turned saint by her own brew."
-	flaws = "Disrespectful, Irresponsible, Drunkard"
-	worshippers = "Warlocks, The Sick and Alchemists"
-	sins = "´Curing´ abnormalities, Refusing to help the misfortunates, Groveling"	
+	desc = "The finest alchemist to ever live, made saint by her own brew."
+	flaws = "Drunkenness, Crudeness, Irresponsibility"
+	worshippers = "The Ill and Infirm, Alchemists, Necromancers"
+	sins = "´Curing´ Abnormalities, Refusing to Help Unfortunates, Groveling"	
 	t0 = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/invoked/diagnose
 	t1 = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/invoked/heal
 	t2 = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/invoked/attach_bodypart
 	t3 = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/invoked/cure_rot
 
 /datum/patron/divine/malum
 	name = "Malum"
-	domain = "Saint of Toil, Value and Craft"
-	desc = "Father of the dwarves, master of the craft."
-	flaws = "Obsessive, Repetetive, Greedy"
-	worshippers = "Smiths, Miners, Artists."
-	sins = "Cheating, Shoddy work, Suicide"
+	domain = "Saint of Toil, Value, and Craft"
+	desc = "Father of the dwarves, master of crafting and industry."
+	flaws = "Obsessive, Exacting, Overbearing"
+	worshippers = "Smiths, Miners, Artisans"
+	sins = "Cheating, Shoddy Work, Suicide"
 
 /datum/patron/divine/eora
 	name = "Eora"
-	domain = "Saint of the Love, Life and Beauty"
-	desc = "Blind love for all, without a shred of hate in her heart"
-	flaws= "Naive, Compulsive, Ignorant"
-	worshippers = "Lovers, Harlots, Doting Grandparents"
-	sins = "Sadism, Celibacy, Ruining beauty"
+	domain = "Saint of Love, Life, and Beauty"
+	desc = "A Saint who sees beauty everywhere and has not a shred of hate in her heart."
+	flaws= "Naivete, Impulsiveness, Ignorance"
+	worshippers = "Lovers, Nite-workers, Doting Grandparents"
+	sins = "Sadism, Celibacy, Ruining Beauty"
 	t0 = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/invoked/lesser_heal
 	t1 = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/invoked/bud
 	t2 = /obj/effect/proc_holder/spell/invoked/projectile/eoracurse

code/modules/clothing/rogueclothes/neck.dm

@@ -219,7 +219,7 @@
 // Only non-refactored psycross because Noc likes vamps. Neeeerd!
 /obj/item/clothing/neck/roguetown/psycross/noc
 	name = "amulet of Noc"
-	desc = "Diligence, study, pursuit of truth and wisdom. Let nothing deterr you from it."
+	desc = "Diligence, study, pursuit of truth and wisdom. Let nothing deter you from it."
 	icon_state = "noc"
 	resistance_flags = FIRE_PROOF