W-Y platoon #136
W-Y platoon #136
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…into wyplatoon
…into wyplatoon
… probably just keep it the same as always ultimately lol
…bloodstained hands. i await you down below. COME TO ME.
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Map review time!!!
This is just an initial review, going to do a deeper check in a few when I have more free time.
- I think the singularity part of the map being present is weird. Generally shipmaps try to imply that the ship is much larger than the map actually is. Singularity being present in a hangar bay is a bit odd.
- should have vendors for coffee/cigarettes for rp
- hangar is too cramped, it needs a bit more space to allow for a large vehicle to get around the hangar bay and enter through the back without having to drive over the landing pad, just in case GMs decide to use a larger dropship.
- Map has no real cargo area for incoming equipment and also has no launch pad & computer
if you disagree with any of this (like if you believe certain things are intentional) do let me know
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forgot to mention, but this podlock south-east in the hangar is also un-named, should be named hangar lockdown or something similar
layering here is also bad, I would suggest using a design like the last image or similar using autoturf strata grass and beach sand in the corner, because lizards like sand i think
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map review changes done |
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Still need to do an in depth review, but you did miss the area around the W-Y logo in the canteen. It needs the rounded corners. |
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Change dropship name to something other than "Orphan Stomper". Too goofy. Suggestions: "Problem Solver", "Guns For Hire", "Peacemaker", "Breadwinner", "Cash Flow" -- anything you could put on a financial report and not get yelled at by the director.
Other than that, looks good to me.
Probably could also toss some edge in there. Reaper's Stockbroker, whatever. |
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About the pull request
TAKEN OVER BY ANDRO THE BETEL!
WY Platoon AZURE-15
new map - USCSS Apostasy
new guns - m39 duplex, M240 firing globs
new platoon - pmc's
Explain why it's good for the game
wy and wy pmcs are quite prominent in the aliens lore and could offer gms and players more opportunities for cool stories and roleplay