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Docs - Small typo fixes on "Understanding iDevice Protocol Layers" doc page #1199

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Docs - Small typo fixes on "Understanding iDevice Protocol Layers" doc page #1199

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Commits on Sep 12, 2024

  1. docs rewording - rephrase sentence about lockdownd

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  2. docs rewording - rephrase itunes install sentence 

    - remove the possessive on iTunes - let the installations be itunes
  installations instead of owned by multiple itunes
- change includes to include to fit the pluralization
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  3. docs typo - fix possessive its

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  4. docs typo - s/deduct/deduce

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  5. docs reword - consistently use 'into' with delve 

    Swap 'delve as to' with 'delve into' which fits better and is the same
form as the other uses of delve in this doc.
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  6. docs reword - remove extra 'both' and reword 

    Reword a clunky sentence by removing an out of place 'both' and trying
to clarify what is meant.

This might not be the right answer -- created a sentence that means you
can access both lockdown and other RemoteXPC services. If this wasn't
the desired meaning maybe it should be "all the other lockdown and
RemoteXPC services" instead.

Also it's possible 'lockdown' should be 'lockdownd' instead.
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  7. docs typo - remove extra 'all' from sentence

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  8. docs reword - reword very long sentence 

    The change result is still a very long sentence and could be broken down
some more but it as at least a bit shorter and slightly more organized.
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  9. docs typo - replace none-standard with non-standard

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